rate my lg team

It's pretty good actually.I assume you are taking on the Elite four? If you are, My comments are:

Blastoises/Persians/Espeons Bite will be extremely usefull in long drawn out battles, as well as helping destroy Agatha and your Rivals Alakazam.

Your levels are ok, might want to level them up a little bit, but I made it through with slightly lower levels. Just buy 15+ Revives, 50+ Lemonade,and a couple of Ether and Max Ether.

You will be pretty weak in the first battle, Clefable should help with Flamethrower and high-ish hp. Also, Ninetails can use sunnyday as long as you switch him/her out quickly. ( I found out Vaporeon is usefull with Water Absorb.)

That's all I can think of right now.

~ Acolyte

Your Espeon has both Psybeam and Psychic, I suggest a different type move or Moonlight.

i have been telling her, but she won't listen

Your team is good but it is not very balanced as you run 2 normal types both of which can be replaced with better normal types such as snorlax or Blissey.
i also noticed that you run 2 water types too, maybe you replace one of them
for another type such as grass or flying, but other then that its pretty good.

Dark Sasuke wrote:

i have been telling her, but she won't listen

I'm assuming that you are going to battle the E4 round 2, as you can't have Espeon until you get the national dex. Maybe you should train some more. I think they are around level 60-70.